PRACTICE 5. Re-writing and proof reading

 PRACTICE 5

Re-writing:

3.1

It has been proved that any organisation that allows researchers to interview its employees runs the risk, but why is this an afirmation? Because they may complain about their boss or about other coworkers. However, when they are interviewed, they may feel obliged to give positive answers to questions instead of their honest opinions, because they are afraid of their bosses finding out what they really think. And it causes that the reputation of the organisation may suffer,  so it is the duty of researchers to ensure this not happen. So in adittion, they must make clear why they are doing the research and maintain the anonymity of everyone involved by using false names. In conclusion, researchers have to be careful, otherwise, there is a good chance of the validity of the whole research project being threatened.

4.1

Before proof-reading:

Many non-European businesses are aiming to enter single European market as they see an unexploited potential there. There are two reasons of this interest. Firstly the non-european organisation are keen to do a business in the European markets because it is one of leading investment destination and easiest place to set up and run a business. Secondly, the single European market provide forein investors with an internationally competitive tax environment. Lastly there's lots of rich people living the country.

After proof-reading:

Many non-European businesses are aiming to enter exclusively the European market as they see an unexploited potential there. There are two reasons for this interest. Firstly, non-European organisations are keen to do business in the European markets because it is one of the leading investment destinations and the easiest place to set up and run a business. Secondly, the European market is the only one that provides foreign investors with an internationally competitive tax environment. Lastly, there are lots of rich people leaving the country.